Day 1: NaBloPoMo — “The End”

This is the first post for NaBloPoMo and it’s also my Trifextra: Week Ninety-Two challenge post.

In The Scorpio Races, author Maggie Stiefvater writes, “It is the first day of November and so, today, someone will die.”  Give us the next thirty-three words of this story, as you imagine it.  Take it wherever you like, but make it original and make it 33 words exactly.

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Only one knows your end day and today is not it.  He will breath life into you and your soul will be satisfied.

No. Not today. But November first is someone’s end day.

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This post was not only inspired by the Trifextra prompt, but also by a Christian concert I just got back from.  I had this written in my head before I got home.  I hope you enjoyed it .

Make sure to stop by NaBloPoMoYeah Write, or Rarasaur to show your support.

If you miss a post, you can catch up by going to my NaBloPoMo page.  

Please let me know your thoughts.  They are always welcome and appreciated.

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14 responses to “Day 1: NaBloPoMo — “The End””

  1. trifectawriting says :

    Better them than me.

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  2. dailyshorts says :

    Thanks atrm61. Glad you liked it.

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  3. atrm61 says :

    Good play on the words here-hopeful ending 🙂

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  4. Ivy (Mommy Dourest) says :

    Very thought-provoking–especially the ending. Nice job!

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  5. Draug419 says :

    I like this!

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  6. Steve Lakey says :

    I agree with rarasaur, this manages to be inspirational and creepy at the same time. No mean feat!

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  7. pratibha says :

    Yes, spooky. Good use of voice in the story.

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  8. rarasaur says :

    Ooh, slightly spooky but also strangely motivating. Loved it! 🙂

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