Day 1: NaBloPoMo — “The End”
This is the first post for NaBloPoMo and it’s also my Trifextra: Week Ninety-Two challenge post.
In The Scorpio Races, author Maggie Stiefvater writes, “It is the first day of November and so, today, someone will die.” Give us the next thirty-three words of this story, as you imagine it. Take it wherever you like, but make it original and make it 33 words exactly.
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Only one knows your end day and today is not it. He will breath life into you and your soul will be satisfied.
No. Not today. But November first is someone’s end day.
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This post was not only inspired by the Trifextra prompt, but also by a Christian concert I just got back from. I had this written in my head before I got home. I hope you enjoyed it .
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14 responses to “Day 1: NaBloPoMo — “The End””
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- November 3, 2013 -
Better them than me.
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Thanks atrm61. Glad you liked it.
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Good play on the words here-hopeful ending 🙂
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Very thought-provoking–especially the ending. Nice job!
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Thanks Ivy for stopping by. Glad you found it intriguing.
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I like this!
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Thanks Draug. Glad you enjoyed!
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I agree with rarasaur, this manages to be inspirational and creepy at the same time. No mean feat!
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Thanks Steve for stopping by and the kind words. 😀
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Yes, spooky. Good use of voice in the story.
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Thanks for visiting and reading Pratibha and it’s good to know that the voice came across clearly in so few words.
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Ooh, slightly spooky but also strangely motivating. Loved it! 🙂
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Hmm. When I wrote it I didn’t think spooky, but after rereading it I can definitely see it. Glad you enjoyed it. 🙂
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